A new kind of competition this time.

If you wish to take part, write a poem that rhymes, about the weather. You may use as many words as you like but must be more than 3 lines long. Any questions, feel free to ask. You have until Thursday 5pm to get your entries into me by PM.

When it Rains it pours,
when i sleep i snore,
when it sunshines i sweat like a whore.

Very good, but just to make sure, is that actually something you're entering?

haha I doubt that highly

Me too. But i thought i'd only get moans if i didnt point it out if it was a serious entry and put it there by mistake

lol okies and woot guys i entered

scorpio.
surely if you limit the poems just to the weather....you are not going to get a very big responce.....are you !

I don't see why not

Yep a serious entry but,
then again poetry doesn't have to be serious

or would you like:

The rain drops are the tears of a child
the sunshine the kiss of a lover
the hazey nights are like a blanket from mother.

We have literature comps once every 3 weeks and we always do a theme on all competitions. If you dont like the theme this time, you can wait til you do. But anyway, i agree with oolongchie, why not


Surely if it was a serious entry you would have read the rules first

And note to everyone - one entry per person please. I take the first entry sent to me, unless you wanna change it for grammatical or spelling errors

Grammatical i don't think i even heard that one at School

I did!!! I heard the word grammatical ... not thatI ever took it ino account...

and whats wrong withdoing a poem on a theme...???

Nothing. You just cant please some people

The two entries are below. You have until Wednesday 5pm to vote

#1



#2

wow bad turnout :S

Yeah rather poor. Guess i wont be doing a poetry comp again

I'm waiting for the next short story competition. Not a fan of poetry unless its humoured, like spike miligans stuff.

It was one I had planned on entering, but for some reason I just never got my act together in time to finish the poem I was working on

Well I have cast my vote - all I can say is to urge members to at least vote if they couldn't enter.

i have one in the poetry bit from ages ago i done for my boyfreind to late now though
sumet i could of done well in for once lol
x

Every time we are apart
And every time we can't speak
It is just another forever moment
Where I can't seem to breathe

Every time we say goodbye
I regret going home
And all I can do until you call
Is sit and wait by the phone

Every time we kiss
I wish it wouldn't end
because whenever you kiss me
I forget what has happened

And every time you touch me
I feel like I can't get enough
Seriously baby, being away from you is tough

you know how I feel
And the same from me to you enjoy every moment with you
And everything we do


theres one i have done agessssssss ago lol

Thats good kelly

i used to be really into stuff like that i did a few there in that poetry bit still on this forum
actually i got loads on my pc at home cause my boyfreind saved them
x

Ya Big Girly

Last hour and a half to vote

And the winner is AboutBlank1976 with his poem (#2) with 8 votes

#1 was written by Rach, with 3 votes. Congrats and thanks to both of you

I was one of the three votes Rach got.

Awesome I won something for the 2nd time in my life. Still have that Coca-Cola World Cup 1994 mini-football somewhere.

well done mr AB

Good stuff AB

I voted for Rach my oldest daughter is called Heather and she wears a leather Jacket

I like this poem


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